honestly really cool. I liked how the steady kick drum came in and tied together the weird ambience. one recommendation I have is to play around with different beats. put percussion on weird offbeats or syncopate and see if you like it. if you don't go too crazy, you can probably find a mix inbetween what I'm talking about and what you have here. the weird noise sound are cool; I like the panning. good job (also, the fadeout is really nice)